Showing posts with label Self-Published Challenge. Show all posts
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Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Review: Jessamine by Eugenia O'Neal

Rating: 3.5/ Stars 
Pages: 312 (eBook)
Genre: Historical Fiction
Series/Standalone: Standalone
Publication Date: June 2012
Source: Received a copy from the author in exchange for honest review.

Synopsis (GoodReads):
Jessamine tells the story of Grace Hylton, an African-American, who arrives on the Caribbean island of St. Crescens full of doubts about her husband’s political aspirations, doubts about her marriage and doubts about the wisdom of relocating. Her native-born husband, Julian, has lived most of his adult life in the States but has come back to St. Crescens, determined to pull his country out of the cauldron of corruption, nepotism and crime into which the leading political dynasty has taken it.

An architect by training, Julian buys and restores Jessamine, an old Great House. What the Hyltons don’t know is that Jessamine is home to the ghost of Arabella Adams who lived there as a governess during the late 1800s.

Jessamine is told from the alternating viewpoints of the two women – both foreigners, both married to local men. An old injustice binds them across the century that separates them, but can Grace discover its roots before St. Crescens is plunged into violence and chaos?
Review:

Plot:
     When I first read the synopsis of Jessamine, I was expecting something different.  The synopsis combined with the cover, made me instantly think ghost story, scary ghost.  Jessamine is a ghost story, just not the scary ghost story that I was expecting.  In fact, the first couple of chapters gave me a feeling of that doom was lurking around the corner.  That Arabella was just waiting around the for Grace's arrival to wreck havoc in her life and marriage.  Arabella did cause some problems in Grace's life but she was more of the friendly ghost that needed help rather than the angry ghost who wanted to run the American woman out of her house and off the island.

     Jessamine, is the story of two women that leave their homeland for a small island in the Caribbean, that is set in its ways and difficult for outsiders to penetrate.  There is Arabella,  an English woman in search of a job and trying to carve a future for herself, in the 1800s.  Then there is Grace, a modern African-American woman who arrives in St. Crescens after leaving her job and family to help her husband pursue his dreams.  The story of each of these women is tied not only to the Great House but also to the past and future of St. Crescens.

Location:
     Normally, I wouldn't talk about location, but I thought it was important to point out the St. Crescens is a fictional island.  I point that out because 1) I suck at geography and 2) O'Neal's description of the island and its history made me want to visit.  I actually looked St. Crescens up on the map.  Then I tweeted the author to let her know that St. Crescens would be an island that I would like to visit for the history alone.
   
     While reading the details of both Arabella and Grace exploring the islands, I could picture it all.  And I wanted to see those same buildings and streets for myself.  I even wanted to take a walk up to the old house and see the fountain and the mango tree.  I wanted to go to the church where Grace looked up birth and marriage records.  I wanted to see the mural painted inside, depicting St. Crescens history.  I am very disappointed that this will never happen.
 
Characters:
     Out of the two main female characters, Arabella and Grace, I felt that Arabella was the strongest of the two.  Arabella's story was more well-rounded.  This could be because she was dead and readers were learning about her history and the events that lead to her death.  Or it could have been that she was more interested in learning and explore St. Crescens and it's culture.

     Grace on the other hand seemed to just be there.  It really wasn't her choice to live in St. Crescens, her husband kind of decided that when he wanted to return home to run for public office.  Grace's interaction with the people of island was limited and it affected the way that I felt about her as a character.  I don't feel that I got to know her as well as I did Arabella.  Sometimes, it seemed that Grace was just a vehicle to tell Arabella's story.

    Both Grace and Arabella's love interest were solid characters set in their ways and sure of the direction that they wanted to take in their lives.  They had the same personality and some of the same background.  I don't want to give too much away, but I did like that both of these men were strong male characters.  Both of them had a deep respect for their partners and wanted the best for them.

   One character that I would like to have seen a little more of is Julian's grandmother.  I had the feeling that she was a woman with her own rich story to tell.  But in keeping with customs of the island, she was very tight-lipped about her past.  She did not even tell her grandson Julian their family history and she raised him.  I don't recall learning what happen to Julian's parents and how he ended up being raised by his grandmother.

Writing:
     My first warning to potential readers is that Jessamine is not written in American Standard English.   Eugenia O'Neal is from British Virgin Islands and some of the spelling and word choice reflects that, this doesn't bother me at all since most of the spelling is close enough. But sometimes there were words that just baffled me (just a few examples there are more):

  • Gawp: which is similar to gawk 
  • Huzzif: which my Google research as indicated is a like "sewing kit".  I couldn't find this word in the dictionary.
Having to look up some of the words was a learning experience and it made me realize how fascinating language is.

     I already mention how much I loved the imagery and what O'Neal was able to do with the island.  But she also did an excellent job of the local dialect.  She was able to portray the local speech patterns and word choices without confusing the reader.  I found myself highlighting many of the colorful sayings and even twitted O'Neal on the few that I wasn't sure about.  A couple of my favorite:
  • "Now you favor a cat what done swallowed a night lizard."
  • "A baby whose mother cries with him in her womb will be born with a head deformed by sorrow.
     The only major problem that I had with Jessamine was the ending.  I felt that it was kind of rushed, once the main story conflict between Grace and Arabella was over it seemed like a race to the end.  I wanted to see how things played out between Grace and Julian better.  There was a lot of stuff that happened at the end but it was glossed over, which was disappointing.

Explanation of Rating:
     
     It took me a while to decided whether to give Jessamine a 3.5 Star rating or a 4 Star rating.  I ultimately decided on a 3.5 Star rating for two reasons:
  1.  Grace - Compared to Arabella her character was on the weak side.  A more well rounded Grace would have made for a better read.  
  2. The Ending - It felt a little rush.  The crucial scene where the outcome of Julian's election race and the consequence happens fast and there are very few details.  Which made it feel rushed.
Overall Recommendation:

     I would recommend Jessamine without hesitation.  It hits most of my literary sweet spots: strong female characters, historical content, excellent writing, and foreign locations.  In fact, I am looking forward to reading more from Eugenia O'Neal.


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Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Review: Covenant by Brandon Massey

Rating: 4 Stars
Pages:  364 (paperback)
Genre: Thriller
Series/Standalone: Standalone
Publication Date: 2010
Source: Purchased eBook from B&N

Synopsis (GoodReads):
On a golden summer morning, fifteen-year-old Anthony Thorne is on a fishing boat with his father, rods cast into the lake, when the crack of a rifle shatters the silence. His father slumps forward, blood leaking from his chest. Horrified, Anthony spins in the direction of the gunfire, and sees a shadowy figure race away from the shore and vanish in the cover of the trees--a vision that will haunt him for years to come . . .

Anthony pulls his dad into his arms, but he is beyond help. He dies in Anthony's embrace, Anthony's scream of anguish echoing across the still waters.

Fifteen years later, a happily married Marine veteran and author of a bestselling series of crime novels, Anthony has achieved a measure of success. But the past still haunts him--in spite of his eyewitness testimony, his father's murder was declared a hunting accident, and no one was ever brought to justice.

On the anniversary of his father's death, a mysterious message arrives from an unknown sender that promises to lead Anthony to the truth. But is Anthony's helper the angel he'd been waiting for--or a devil in disguise?

Determined to find answers, Anthony and his wife soon find themselves hunted by a team of assassins dispatched by a powerful organization with frightening technological resources. The killers pursuing them are as fanatical in their beliefs as they are well-equipped--loyal followers of a charismatic leader who might be the most dangerous man in America . .
Review:


I am normally not a huge thriller fan.  I do read them, for the same reasons that I read romance.  They have a tendency to get to the action fast and keep me wanting to turn the pages.  Brandon Massey's Covenant,  did just that; hooked me.  In fact, I read the whole book in two sittings.  I just had to know what would happen next and didn't want to put it down.

Covenant opens with what should be a relaxing afternoon between father and soon but there is something wrong with father.  The son, Anthony, knows this and think that he has done something wrong.  Then a shot is heard and the father is killed.  Reading this made me sad.  Massey did a good job in showing how important and deep the relationship was between Anthony and his father.  This helps the reader later understand why the death of the father had such a profound affect not only on Anthony but the who Thorne family, even 15 years later.  It also makes the reader what to know why the father was killed and by whom.

I tend to fill that thrillers in general don't focus on characters that much, and often times they can seem a little one or two dimensional. Covenant, sort of falls into this trap.  The main characters, Anthony and his wife, Lisa, are well thought out. I really enjoyed both of them, even though I would have liked to see more of Lisa.  The secondary characters were a little flat.  I wish that characters like Mike, Anthony's best friend, was flushed out a little more.

The way that Massey handle the clues that helped solve the murder was clever.  I loved it.  Everything added up perfect and when it all came together, I didn't find myself scratching my head and thinking WTF?   I did make an accurate guess on some of the clues, they weren't that hard to figure out (at least of me) and knowing what was going to happen did not lessen my enjoyment of the story.  It just made to excited to get to a section and say "I know it".

Covenant, was filled with some good quotes, both from the bible and some from Massey.  One of my favorites is:
They said that time healed all wounds, but that was bullshit.  Some wounds, time allowed to fester and spread, until they had consumed body, mind and soul.

For a minute I wonder if Massey was committing Thesaurus abuse.  I had to look up several words, them seemed to fit perfectly in the sentence but sometimes their placement did mess up my flow.  But on the other hand I did learn new words. For example;
cabal (n): the artifices and intrigues of a group of persons secretly united in a plot (as to overturn a government); also: a group engaged in such artifices and intrigues. 
Overall Recommendation:
I would have no problem at all recommending Covenant, to a friend. In fact, I read it for a book club and everyone loved it.

Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Review: The List by J.A. Konrath

Rating: 3 Stars
Pages: eBook
Genre: Thiller
Series/Standalone: Standalone
Publication Date: April 2009
Source: Personal Collection


Synopsis (Goodreads):

JA Konrath is the author of six novels in the Lt. Jacqueline "Jack" Daniels thriller series, the latest of which is Cherry Bomb.

THE LIST is a bit of a departure for Konrath. It's a technothriller about a group of ten people who all have tattoos of numbers on the bottoms their feet, and don't know why.

One of them, a Chicago Homicide cop named Tom Mankowski, has had one of these strange tattoos since birth. When he investigates a violent murder and discovers the victim also has a tattooed number, it sets the ball rolling for an adventure of historic proportions.

To say more would give away too much.

Like the Jack Daniels series, The List combines laugh out loud humor with serious suspense and thrills.

If the Kindle had back jacket copy, it would read:

A billionaire Senator with money to burn...
A thirty year old science experiment, about to be revealed...
Seven people, marked for death, not for what they know, but for what they are...


Review:


     The main reason that I picked up this one was because 1) because it was free, 2) I have been curious about Konrath novels for a while.  I normally and not a thriller reader but when I do read them I do enjoy them.  I think it is the pace, because they are fast paced and writers of thrillers seem to jump straight into the action, it makes it really easy to get caught up into the story.
     The List is just as fast as any thriller novel.  I was hooked within the first couple of pages.  I wanted to know what connections Mankowski had with the other victims and potential victims.  The action never stopped and because of that reason I was able to finish The List in one date (and it is not that long).
     The plot was interesting at first.  I was intrigue to find out about the number tattoos on the bottom of the foot and how these tattoos connected the character.  But as the story progressed and things began to fall into place, it become clear that the plot was pretty outlandish.  Completely and totally unrealistic, in order to enjoy The List. I sort of had to suspend my disbelief and just roll with it. As the story progressed I had to suspend my disbelief even more, Kornath throw in everything but the kitchen skin in his plot.
     While the pace was fast there was not much character development.  The characters were just there, I wanted to see what was going to happen to them but I wasn't invested in them.  The lack of character development did not take away from my enjoyment of the story but I did notice that I could have cared less if one of the main characters lived or died.
      The writing was average. There were some funny jokes that made me chuckle but it was more like slap stick comedy.


Overall Recommendation:
   
     I would recommend this one to anyone that what wants an easy and fast paced thriller to read.  I would add in the warning that the plot is a little outlandish and the unrealistic.

Monday, January 23, 2012

Review: Who Is He To You by Monique D. Mensah

Rating: 3 Stars
Pages: eBook
Genre: Fiction (Drama)
Series/Standalone: Book 1 in Malignant Mind Series 
Publication Year: 2010
Source: Purchased


Synopsis (Goodreads):
Simone, a shockingly beautiful teen, is on the downward spiral of destruction as she battles incest and self-hatred; she finds cutting to be the only way to relieve her pain. Jessica lives the upscale lifestyle of a refined society matron. She strives to be the perfect wife, but without her husband, Ross, she would be nothing more than the abused stripper he rescued 16 years ago. Ryan, a fiery thirty-something, is quickly slipping into depression and prescription drug-addiction as her boyfriend, Anthony, artfully dangles the empty promise of marriage. As the shattered lives of three very different women collide, they find that they have one thing in common: they are all in a desperate fight to hang on to love. But when love involves incest, self-mutilation, drug-addiction and murder, will they continue to fight or will they find the strength to escape before it's too late? Experience their emotional journey through to the shocking end where these women will experience injury, imprisonment and even death while crafting new lives from the ashes of their ruination.

Review:
This review contains spoilers.  Read at your own risk.

I was looking for what genre to classify Who Is He To You in, both B&N and Amazon have it listed under drama, which is very fitting.  This is a drama filled book all three of three of the female main characters experience nothing buy drama, rarely is there a normal moment in their lives.

Before I get to the drama and the main characters, let discuss the title.  For me the title Who Is He To You gave away the twist in the book (there is always the fact that I think there should be a question mark).  Combine the title with other clues in the book, I knew the twist before I got to it.  In fact, it frustrated me that Mensah waited so long for the big reveal, when everything fell into place.  Then there were times when I wonder if the author was awry of the fact that the puzzle was so easy to piece together for me the reader and she did it intentionally.  But either way, when the big reveal finally came out, I merely shrugged my shoulders.  Kind of disappointed that she used the method that she did.

I have read plenty of reviews on this book and looked forward to reading it.  I really wanted to get to know each of the characters and about their lives.  Instead, I ended up finding out that all the characters were damaged.  Not just slight imperfections, but truly emotionally, psychologically damaged.  Each and everyone of them (mainly the main characters and most of the secondary characters).  All of them needed counseling and probably a couple of prescriptions.  It made it hard for me to root for any of them.

Simone is 14 years old, beautiful and being molested by her father.   She is the character that the reader is suppose to be the most sympathetic to because of her situation and her age.  At times I felt think shaking her.  There is one chapter where she ignores all the warning signs (even her own misgiving) and walks straight into a dangerous situation. All I could think was that I saw this coming, she saw this coming why did she walk straight into it.  Why is she surprised at the outcome?  Out of all the characters I liked her the most.  Even if I felt that her character was inconstant at times.

Jessica is Simone's mother and completely unaware of what is going on between Simone and her father.  She has issues from her past that affect her self-esteem.  She doesn't feel that she deserves the life that she has been given.  Her relationship with Simone's father, Ross, is so unbalanced and she just wants to keep her family together.

The synopsis doesn't even began to fully explain the crazy mess that is Ryan.  She basically is a mess.  Mensah describes Ryan as a woman with an addiction, to drugs and love.  Really, what seems to be the problem is that she suffers from at most a panic disorder and probably a mood disorder.  I really didn't like how this was glanced or and so easily resolved.  After breaking up with Anthony (aka Ross), she was able to overcome her addiction to pain killers and him in three days.  Not very realistic at all.

Anthony/Ross is the most disturbed at all.  He justifies his molesting of his daughter because of some Oedipus complex crap he had for his mother.  He justifies his treatment of his wife because she was too willing to please.  And his affair with Ryan was because he was his father's son.

I did like the plot.  I liked how Mensah gave the reader background on Anthony/Ross and how he became the man that became.  She did the same thing with Jessica which later helped justify some of the things that she was willing to do and did.  I only wish that she had done the same thing with Ryan, who felt kind of incomplete.

Even though I didn't like the characters I did like the story overall.  I wanted to see what happened and how it played out. The last 200 "pages" went by quickly, the action really picked up and I was on the edge of my seat to see what happen next.  It didn't quite play out like I thought it would.  And Mensah did end up wrapping everything up with a little bow, but I think the whole mess ended the why that it should have.

One of the biggest issue I had was with formatting.  It was horrible and all over the place.  I think its because I  brought my copy from Barnes and Nobles for my nook and the author used Smashword as her distributor.

Someone contacted me through Goodreads and said that my the settings on my Nook may have been causing my formatting issues.  I checked it out and set it to publishers default and the text size to the smallest.  That solved most of the formatting issues, but it seems to have made the text to small for me to comfortably read (I don't need glasses for reading).  So, if you are having a problem with formatting while reading an e-book it might be your settings.

Pros: Plot, Action, Drama
Cons: Characters

Overall Recommendation:

I would recommend this book.  Monique D. Mensah is a good story teller.  I have a feeling that the next books in the series will be better and I am going to read them.  From what I can gather the next one can be read as a standalone.  I am interested to see what Mensah thinks of next.

Saturday, January 7, 2012

Self-Published Reading Challenge

Even though I have not done much reading this year, I have kept up with whats going on in publishing a little.  One of the things that I have been excited about and want to explore more is the growing Self-Published Movement.

I have read some romance by self-published authors and for the most part they have been okay.  I think for this challenge I am going to explore a little more.

This challenged is sponsored  by Workday Reads.

Challenge Guidelines:
This challenge will run from Jan 1, 2012 - Dec 31, 2012. 
Anyone can join, you don't need to be a blogger. If you don't have a blog, feel free to sign-up in the comments. You can post reviews to any book site (i.e. Amazon, Barnes and Noble, Smashwords, Goodreads, etc). 
Any genre, length or format of book counts, as long as it is self-published by the author.
You can list your books in advance or just put them in a wrap-up post. If you list them, feel free to change them as the mood takes you.
Sign-ups will be open until Dec 15, 2012, so feel free to join at any time throughout the year. 
Levels:
  • Sentence - 5 books
  • Paragraph- 10 books
  • Page - 25 books
  • Chapter - 50 books
  • Short Story - 75 books
  • Novel - 100 books
  • Series - 150 books
My goal is Paragraph.  I don't have a list of books yet.  I will add them as the year goes on.

  1. Who Is He To You by Monique D. Mensah
  2. The List by J.A. Konrath
  3. Covenant by Brandon Massey